All Comments on 'Hiding in the Shadows'

This is beautiful sj ~

Such patience in your lens,

such focus in your eye

as you saw beauty

in the boldness of design.

I love that bit ~

really well written piece,

Thanks.

~ Jenn

This is good, sophia. I like the question at the end.

I really like the first two stanzas, and the playfulness combined with a tone of regret. Sort of poignant.

Nice style employed,

but riding throughout

is that small thought --

"...you saw the beauty in objects,

but not in me."

And you didn't even need the illustration to support your words. Well done.

interesting choice for a framework and the emotional concept well worked with the overlying metaphor...

Well done SJ

You really captured so many moving thoughts here, in a moment of life changing realization.

Truly a portrait in words.

Lovely

and filled with such emotion.

Lovely poem, SJ

I loved the writing all the way through, but the question at the end knocked me on my but and knocked all the wind out of me...

Illustrated drawing of a woman in the shadows tends to reveal the meaning of this ethereal rendering. Very sweet and passionate.

no matter the camoflauge. TK U MLJ LV NV

Than any lens, or camera. This stuns, in the way a few humane pics do