I love this series ~
The illustration is beautiful
and your words sure do it justice.
A really lovely piece.
The photo is so stunning that I had a difficult time moving my eyes from it. But I finally got to the poem. This entire series, words and images, has been incredible.
...compelled to go back and read the others in this series...striking, dynamic pics, lauren...did you take these (can you tell me, and where)...i'm thinking probably so...beautiful, transcendent words too...thanks.
Both the illustration and the poem are striking in their beauty. Great job!
I just went back and read all 6 in series, truely beautiful Lauren. I hope you intend on submitting the series somewhere.... an electronic chapbook? They should be seen by more people. ~as
With this photo almost instills a mystical aura to your words; or is it the other way around?
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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