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Seed and Soul

byMoon Dragon©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/10/05

whoa

*speechless

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by Cathleen08/12/05

So glad...

I'm very glad you decided to post this story. I hope you keep writing... IM that muse and let the thoughts flow.

Thanks for a great read.

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by spacekowboy08/12/05

Whew! Is it hot in here or is it this story?

Incredible story . Loved it. Sexy , dark , mysterious. Greatjob :)

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by Anonymous02/20/07

A fair exchange

Your story gave me a hard-on so I gave your story a five.

A little constructive criticism: learn what the term "purple prose" means and in future stories make your prose less purple.

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by Anonymous03/13/08

purple is fine by me

Yeah the prose was purple but i've always enjoyed a good bit of florid literature keep writing and i'll keep reading.

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by helldaemen06/26/11

POV

I love it! The story being in the first person point of view makes it all the much better! Great visuals :)

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