I'm very glad you decided to post this story. I hope you keep writing... IM that muse and let the thoughts flow.
Thanks for a great read.
Incredible story . Loved it. Sexy , dark , mysterious. Greatjob :)
Your story gave me a hard-on so I gave your story a five.
A little constructive criticism: learn what the term "purple prose" means and in future stories make your prose less purple.
Yeah the prose was purple but i've always enjoyed a good bit of florid literature keep writing and i'll keep reading.
I love it! The story being in the first person point of view makes it all the much better! Great visuals :)
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