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All Comments on 'Seed and Soul'

by Moon Dragon

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
whoa

*speechless

CathleenCathleenover 18 years ago
So glad...

I'm very glad you decided to post this story. I hope you keep writing... IM that muse and let the thoughts flow.

Thanks for a great read.

spacekowboyspacekowboyover 18 years ago
Whew! Is it hot in here or is it this story?

Incredible story . Loved it. Sexy , dark , mysterious. Greatjob :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
A fair exchange

Your story gave me a hard-on so I gave your story a five.

A little constructive criticism: learn what the term "purple prose" means and in future stories make your prose less purple.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
purple is fine by me

Yeah the prose was purple but i've always enjoyed a good bit of florid literature keep writing and i'll keep reading.

helldaemenhelldaemenalmost 13 years ago
POV

I love it! The story being in the first person point of view makes it all the much better! Great visuals :)

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