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dark waters

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by My Erotic Tale08/02/05

excellent poetry

love the water blue~ deeper is darker

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by Anonymous08/02/05

any port in a storm...

we are all tossed about in a sea of dreams. This is
my new favorite. Short, filling, truthful, and smooth
in the read. sand

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by ~hellbaby~08/02/05

Cool Blue

A touch of blue makes a cooling poem for a heat wave. I really like 'swallowing shattered reflections' it is a nice description of a bad dream.

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by RhymeFairy08/03/05

Deeply Emotional~

I think you can do no wrong~!!
I love the picture you have painted for us. I can just see you seeking solace in the arms of your love ... A lil darkness enters with the mention of the hallowed rogues, and thereafter. Nice poem and startling imagery. I * saw * it all.
You go Blue ~!! * Grins *

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by quietpoet08/03/05

Special... That Blue Arm

That I have found so much comfort with... OOPS! That is MY arm you are talking about. I do like it anyway! This poem says so much with so few words... It is all love!!!

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by Syndra Lynn08/05/05

lovely

in the cold late hours
of a bad dream

You are a dream. Delightful poem.

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