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it is rusted I am blind

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by Lauren Hynde08/03/05

Ah!

A spin-off poem. It ends up making perfect sense, even without its companion piece. There's a definite Bestiary potential here.

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by WickedEve08/03/05

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Totally neat poem. pussy feet?

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by RhymeFairy08/03/05

*Ya Got Me *

I like the way this poem flows.
I have to admit to wanting to read it
again an again. It confused me at first,
then it * Clicked *

Cocky lil poem here ~ * Grins *

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by Anonymous08/03/05

beautiful piece...

of poetic justice here...very nice...thanks.

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by Anonymous08/03/05

a poem that clicks..

in blind faith...and tis awesome in appearance...blue

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by Anonymous08/04/05

Excellent

Gurgled crow! Love that!

And the nod to Sandburg-- an excellent little poem that begs to be read several times. Good work, Anna!

Fly

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by twelveoone08/06/05

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this is what you excel at, these little mysteries that have varied solutions.
I am still working on the the title.

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by Bill Dada01/18/06

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It is amazing how you are able to use just a few words to take me on a long and complex journey.

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