All Comments on 'Veronica in Japan'

Excellent story, I loved it. please do more.

How many times did the author use the word "Oriental?" And "sweaty subcontinental," - are you serious?! I realize that this story is playing to a humiliation fetish by making it obvious that Veronica doesn't want to have sex with these men and that doing so is demeaning, but when you blatantly use race as the main factor in what what makes them so unappealing it's just plain racism. Normally a story about a lovely young white woman getting used by a sleazy Japanese crime boss and his minions would be right up my alley, but the way this one is written just doesn't sit right. Interracial sex is hot - racism is not.

Fantastic story - hope you don't stop writing.

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