All Comments on 'The Concert Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Continue!

Please continue this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
i love this

please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
please continue

i love this - i can't tell you how many times i've read these stories and made myself cum. please continue! i think he should tie her up...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
more

yes, tie her up and make her beg. so hot. rubbing my pussy - reading this makes me so horny.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
MORE!!!!!!!!!

This series is so fucking hot! I've got off so many times to this. Please continue it!!! Have him fuck her pussy doggie style and make it hard and rough, really hard and rough. He sounds so insanely hot! I wanna hear more about they're delicious sexcapades! Maybe you could even bring Rick back in with him and let them double p her, now that would be hot!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS SERIES!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please continue

She seems like the kind of character who would get quite jealous if she saw Tyler with one of her friends.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Love it!!!!

I always come back to this story. It's one of the few stories that always turns me on no matter how many times I read it. (: I was going to say please keep writing but from looking at the other comments, I'm pretty sure you aren't... I would have greatly enjoyed a fourth or fifth chapter but thanks for atleast writing a second and third one! Great series! I enjoyed it a lot.

NemosParamoreNemosParamoreover 9 years ago
Green with Envy

I love this story. It's one of my favorites. It has set the bar for me as a writer while embodying our deepest fantasy. We all want to be Tina. It's a seductive tale that lures you in than pushes you over the edge. So, thank you for writing it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Wow

These are the times I wish I had an older brother...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

You should include her brother too!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More

it is so hot I love it

sassysasha89sassysasha89over 7 years ago

You've kept it going nicely and still hot. Please continue with ch. 4

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
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Will there be a chapter 4?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
We Need The Concert Ch. 04

Part 4 is set up with The Concert Ch. 03

Tyler, Rick and Dan all had her ass.

They are all friends, she is their slut.

She has a pussy, an ass, and a mouth.

Would she love to be the center of a foursome?

All her holes filled with cock?

But, wait, what about her brother?

Does he find out that his sister is easy fuck slut?

Will he take her ass too?

I can't wait for you to write about that.

All questions would be reveled in The Concert Ch. 04

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nevermind

Nevermind, I saw your reply, they've been removed. Thanks anyway!

-@forgottenCharm

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Add a new character for the next chapter

Add a new random black bull for the next chapter... and in chapter 5 get shows pregnant.

After playing that line out, she'll have a black baby from the one time she was bred black.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Good to go

Love the beginning of this story but aside from tyler that was rape lookingforward to ch.4

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More

More!

a part of me really wants her brother to take a turn ...

followed by her being a regular side to any gettogethers as well as general unlimited access to her by his friends, even when they have dates and slip away just to fuck her, oh oh oh

and if her dad learned only of her brother and shared her, not knowing of the regular gangbangs of her brother and his pals

she would be fucking them as a whole group and with any dildoes or bottles tney wanted to use as well as belts and whips, i kept thinking with rick that a nice hot tube light up her twat while he reamed her ass would be so nice...

this is pulling at me so hard

Azrael1801Azrael1801over 5 years ago
More more more👍🏽

You've set the tone for your next chapter already, tie her up and let thegang bang begin. Maybe she's blind folded or has a bag over her head so the brother gets in on the act with or with out knowing who's the girl is

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Can you please post more of this??

creampies4evercreampies4everover 3 years ago
Loved It

Always love reading a series where the girl is a total slut. Nothing like having a total slut around.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Please continue

You’ve set it up perfectly for a fourth and fifth. Keeping with the she doesn’t want it but it feels so good she can’t help but want more. Tied down before she knows that it not just going to be her and & Tyler. Maybe a blindfold but no to the brother or dad. That shit is just sick.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Extremely hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Please add more! I haven’t read anything good on here in a while. Neeeeeed more

BluecockneyBluecockneyalmost 3 years ago

Very good, please add more chapters!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

wow tyler doesnt mind sharing?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

not bad!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Tyler is clearing a sexuality-confused beta male with a serious dose of self-hatred.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I thought it was great!! I was expecting a concert 4 and 5 at least. She's now had a vibrator while assfucked. When will she get 2 at once - DP??? There's 4. Here's 5 - while watching a second DP with 2 more brother's friends, with her mouth hanging open and tongue wagging her bro air tights her!!! That's 6. she loves air tight. She confesses to bro this so he gets 2 other football friends w big dicks. 7 secretly she wants bro in ass because he is biggest of all. I want to write but too scared.

CucumberLemonadeCucumberLemonadeabout 2 years ago

And there it was, now I am waiting for Part 4.

Oh jeez always just a fantasy…

Sooo good to find this one here.

Next chapter please 😉

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

More chapters plz with her and Tyler

Gym52Gym52almost 2 years ago

It would be interesting to find out the situation that Tina and Tyler are in now seventeen years on from the original concert.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

More Tina and Tyler please chapter 4 and 5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

More chapters please!! We need moreeee! Will they become a couple?? Or will she have a harem? Lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Really love this. She knows she loves it and goes with it. Would love to read more about this girls adventures.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It's Dan j love how Dan is just so dominant and Tyler mhm I love it if this could happen in real life

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

thanks!...

Sweetnothings77Sweetnothings77about 1 year ago

Some times its like that We womens DONT Want to be made Love to but we just want to be Taken and Fucked and FUCKED HARD. I know I like when some Mens just got at me straight away when we was some where and they was all ready HARD and Just TOOK me and Stripped me or just turned me around and raised my Dress or Skirt and lowered or ripped off my Panties and just FUCKED right IN to me. :-)

Yeah I been a Slut just like Tina.

21stcv21stcvabout 1 year ago

Is the next chapter telling of all 4 of them meeting up in the STD clinic and testing positive?

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Lucky girl!

Tess (uk)

WLCARRWLCARR8 months ago

Ch 4. Tyler invites Tina to a picnic in the woods and both

Dan and Rick are waiting there.

Tina passes out and has to be revived several times.

Spoiler alert; they’re brothers and own a large farmhouse.

Ch 5. Her brother reveals the whole thing was his plan.

By this time, Tina realizes she’s a sex addict.

Go cold turkey or continue?

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Totally hot, erotic story.

spermman76spermman767 months ago

Please write an episode that brother fucks her.

SissyBiJockSissyBiJock7 months ago

Wish there was a part 4. Now that all 3 friends know she's a slut and they can have their way with her pretty much whenever they want as long as her brother doesn't find out, eventually they will setup a gb where they all fuck her all night and she loves it. Would be really hot if Tyler made her his gf but willingly shared her and had her do slutty things in risky situations like the original concert fuck.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Ugh why hasn't there been an update yet

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Living for this series 😁🙏 hopefully an update??

maddictmaddict3 months ago

Girl gone wild (!) I think she will have more than one lover from now untill....

just_to_readjust_to_read3 months ago

This series is so good! I'm really hoping there's a part 4, and 5!

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