by JANAMARIE
I enjoyed this story. It had a nice build up the sex made me want to trade places with Sara. D'Angela
Great little story! Excellent vivid descriptions! Certainly kept my --er--attention raised!
The hottest story I've read yet. I could picture everything in ever y
seen.
Whew, you can really write. It was impossible not to be able to visualize every scene and feel as if I was right there with them. Most authors cater to the male audience and ignore us females. Thanks for giving us something to drool over. That jacuzzi bit was terrific.
This is a Great Love Story and you left it wide open to follow their lives further and even teased at their answers. We need closure. Sign me---ONE OF YOUR ADORING FANS!
Liked the story. It has several avenues it can travel, and I hope you follow all of them. 56
This was so HOT that I could not stop reading it. Makes me wish I had a SEXY sister.
Only wish I had a sister like this. Great story very hot. Loved every minute of it and certainly made me hard.Yes I did pull off. Thanks
This was a really good piece, it can have so many different sequels, I look forward to reading more
Brother and sister lit each other's fire with the expected results. Good story.