All Comments on 'Zoo Bar'

great start! i'd love to see how you develop gerry and ginger's romance. can't wait to read more!

why does this girl need baby sitters ??

i'm sorry but this is literotica for a reason. this story doesn't belong on this site. stick to your regular day job.

Well I loved it!! I need more, plz write a second one!!!!

also she has friends to protect her from getting raped and it adds to the mystery of what's gonna happen next. without the friends then she would have gone home with the guy and have sex, end of story but now there can be a second story.

i think it does belong on this site. the is tones of description which makes it hot. it's a tease, u want more. it makes u want to know what is going to happen next.