All Comments on 'weight of the mold'

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
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I get a visual of a dead man on a rotting ship.

whew, these lines...devastate

"Immobilized, these chains

do not hold him here,

they hold him together."

I am completly mystified by the end line

"Do we peel or layer tonight?"

I feel it could be better, but it is always a pleasure wending through the mysteries

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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This is a deep work that needs at least 3 readings. Mystical and realistic all in one.

wonderful work

du

Mentioned in the Sunday Reviews

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I see a picture

of a fate lost in the comfort zone...going round...and a few other images come to mind...tis a very prolific flash..thanks blue

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
It reads well...

and I don't get it. Too deep for a shallow mind such as I.

So, I see a cigar store indian with a 'feathered hat'

and a need to move west out of the way of the Spainish

long guns. Tell us about the last line, please. sand

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