Now this is right up my alley... a poem that made me go research and learn!!!! Upon learning a tad I see what you are getting at! Lovely and exciting blue a wonderful write that causes me to feel alive! Due to the need to learn and seek what others are learning. The connection of experience shared in a poem.
Mentioned in the Sunday reviews
it had that blue feel to it (~_*)
The ability to pull thoughts together in a way that inspires is the mark of a poet, not just a spinner of words...
As I mentioned to du~, this is a terrible thing to do, to this poor reader on a Sunday.
Not sure if this is English Lit 101, Basic Astronomy, or Intro to Anthropology; but in any case, praise to Buddha for the power of Goggle.
You've a fascinating read here, though not easy; more suitable to a specialty niche audience. Me? I need to decompress .
smooth and easy . I just have a problem
with the reality of it. Maybe if the title was 'Anninaki
for dumb asses 101'. Yell me up if you return to earth,
where the waves kiss the evening sunset. sand
Wow ... what a spinner.
I love the imagery here.
This one took me to another world.
Love changes everything it touches my friend.
Good ... Bad .. to love we are all ... One.
More Please ~
Very nicely done. Loved this line 'as love depicts elements lost by control'
Each stanza of this rendering spirits the reader away into images that caress the mind.
images you create in this fine piece... Does "Anninaki"..have any relationship to Annunaki?
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