All Comments on 'Camping'

Oh that all women were that laid back about being with two lovers at the same time.

edit before submission-lost track of who she was talking to, and boyfriend is fucking her, then he's not then he is again-confusion ruins the eroticism

Thought the story was well written.Love the fact that our heroine does a lot to ensure this night of experimentation wouldn't ruin the friendship. Thought it was sweet of her to take responsibility for that. Good job!!

Although I loved the excitement and tension(based on my own hardness excitement level while reading) I'd agree with another poster that you should take the necessary time to proof-read your submission for typo's, grammatical and spelling errors. A very common mistake is the use of the word "then" and "than"...two very different meanings...

Other than this, I almost came....I thought the middle and ending were too short...which just left me hanging...

Practice...makes perfect!

That was a GREAT story! It brought back many wonderful memories.

LUV,

Chuck

Forget the discontinuities this story made me cum.

baby you can cum sit on my face anytime your stories are so hot and so are you

Good story - my only comment (from a literary perspective, and as an ex-military atheist) is that comments on Islam don't belong in an erotic story, unless it involves cum on a hijab. Show, don't tell - walk your character through the emotions of no longer being ashamed of her sex.

But seriously, good story - I only wanted to leave a comment better than "I jacked off to it" - which I did. ;)

hey whats with the comment about islam and islam men? there is nothing inferior about muslim men and their penises , please dont assume or think that just because their women are covered, they are inferior

Can't wait to read more.

The back story was a great set up and getting in your head while all this was going on is what made this super hot. Great sizzle - lucky guys. Certainly reinforces a certain kink... Hell yes, I'd share my lover with a friend just for the chance to watch her in action.

I have shared my wife like that and it continues to be such a turn-on that we relive it fantasy nearly everytime we make love. Many years on it still has the power to stimulate earth shattering orgasms for us both.

I've read other stories about camping trips, but this one is distinctly unique...the perspective is fresh, insightful and, well...hot.

but what there is was first class! Well done

Nice

Hey that was 1 super hot story - I really liked it!

Keep on writing - pleaaaase :)

Great story. Enjoyed the writing style.

I must have had a hidden desire to share my wife with other men but i was not aware of it. I failed to explore several possible chances to share my wife. Then 2 or 3 years later i would look back & say, "Fuck! Where was my brain? What's wrong with me?"

One of such cases happened years ago. A very good friend of mine (my erstwhile colleague) was sent by his company to our city. His job was tio last 6 to 8 weeks. My wife & I insisted that he stay with us.

My friend had just gone thru an divorce: his wife literally kicked him out after he had cheted on her one time too many.

My wife & my friend hit it off from the get go.

Once while he was doing the graveyard shift, my wife brought him up in our conversation. We talked about him in full detail. Then after a short pause my wife said something like this:

"I wonder what he is like in bed. My gut feeling tells me he is gentle... We know he is very experienced in that domain... He is healthy & athletic... He did get what he deserved but i feel sorry for him..."

STUPID ME. She was asking for my permission to sleep with him!