by KinkyJohn
your stort was to short and was about as exciting as watching flies fuck. once again you failed to describe what the mother looks like,and the sex was very cold i felt no heat at all from the story.
The story itself is fine in premise but the lack of either descrition or erotic build up makes the whole affair as boring as whale shit.
Also, you seem to be constantly changing tenses and perspectives throughout the story, making the whole thing a jumbled mess.
Bring home a cunt sucker for mom and let her give mom extra orgasms. Convince mom that she should stay naked all of the time to make it easier for her son and her cunt sucker to have access to her body.Get mom use to having 10 to 12 orgasms a day and if she doesn't get her orgasms she gets grumpy.With mom's belly swollen up with her son's baby, she spends most of the day setting on her cunt sucker's face having many orgasms. Thanks for the post.....Rich
John and his mother have the perfect setup now. The boy's taking real good care of his mother's cunt and he's blowing his young balls up between her legs whenever he feels the slightest urge. Why bring another, inferior cunt into the equation?
chapter 2 would develop the characters and story a little more. just not my cup of tea.