All Comments on 'Mind Fuck'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
yeah!

this is a great poem. no doubt.

Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10over 6 years ago
I wish it was,

I read it twice hoping I was wrong. Unfortunately I wasn't. I was looking for my mind to be fucked over, and was prepared for it going in. Maybe I was too well prepared, because there was nothing there. I read it from beginning to end, then I read it from the end to the beginning and was very disappointed. It was garbage. No, it was worse than garbage. It was as if you took a crap in the middle of a busy highway. Then you expected a sentient human being to stop his/her car, get out, and clean it up with their bare hands. That is how terrible this poem was. It is a disgrace to call it a poem.

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I love a good mind fuck. That is what erotica is to me. Hopefully, I will improve my skills and turn a few people on. If you ever have any suggestions on how I can grow as a writer, drop me a line.