by Charles Petersunn
Excellent story. It reads very much like some Victorian erotica I've seen. Superb detailing, and I especially appreciate the dialogue. Keep it up.
In that those that might want to read about a young woman being humiliated wouldn't necessarily want to read about a young man being humiliated (part 2). I've enjoyed both installments....it's only a matter of time before all the girls in the class have to strip, or perhaps all of the boys, or both!
and well written, can't wait to read on. Thank You. respectfully a fan in Texas naynay
just a general comment on all the chapters....GREAT! ithink what really makes your stories come alive is the small details, such as Tina's glasses. And of course the not quite but close to what could be called bordering the line between adults (18+) and not quite adults, at least sexually. Anyway, great stuff!
GREAT STORY!!! DIRTY AND HOT AND EXCITING!!! The best man and girl seduction blowjob story. I'm going to read this again and again. Thanks Charles.
I rarely like series but this one has got me hooked. I can't wait to finish it.
(and perhaps every teen girl's as well). I'm so looking forward to the remaining episodes that I won't write more. I'm off to the next one. Thanks for excellent fantasy and detailed writing.
This isn't my usual choice of genres but I loved reading these first three chapters so much that I went and got my husband and spent the next couple of hours making him aware of exactly the effect it had had one me :)
Thanks from the both of us.
certainly kept my attention - great details to fill the mind - am enjoying this series.
Thank you so much for a sweet, charming and fun story about seduction. It's been a while since i laughed out loud until i cried and could only stop because i had to keep reading. It's so nice to read a story of such innocence without (so far) a big, bad wolf on the scene. I know this story has some years on it, but it's a great read. Can't wait to read the rest. Thanks again...hcl
I would give anything for a blowjob from a sweet young thing like her. Keep it up these are fantastic stories.
That was some lesson, especially keeping the lesson private. I certainly wouldn't want the entire class lined up outside of my office.
Mr. Peters tell us again why you had to switch schools.
the teacher is so nice to teach Tina how to do this. she will be a better woman and wife because of this lesson. I teach a class and so wish one of my students would come see me like Tina!