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Al·Gharb·7

byLauren Hynde©
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by CharleyH08/14/05

:)

As always, your words whisk me to new places, and even into different times. The choice of your photos works to enhance each poem in this series. Excellent.

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by Anonymous08/14/05

images

are just breath taking..as the words are too..they would make a nice table top book to peruse...enjoyed...bluerains

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by Angeline08/14/05

This whole series

is lovely. No "s" on "toward." I love the way you break the line that ends with "the sea."

smoochies.

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by WickedEve08/14/05

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This series really should be in a book. I'd even buy the book. :)

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by My Erotic Tale08/15/05

Illustration exrodinaire

I like the literary creations, and enjoyed the sea rock and sand (begining) the best so far. As a series this is a very good set.

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by Anonymous08/16/05

I'm with Eve

Beautiful, moody images in words and picture. This series is definitely book-worthy. *Lining up behind Evie*

Tess

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by Anonymous08/16/05

Outstanding

This series has been a delight to watch develop, and this is a wonderful conclusion.

Thank you, Lauren!

Fly

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by LeBroz12/12/06

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This final piece in the series
So symbolic with the photo automatically assumed of the sun setting;
Which here now speaks on so many levels.

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by LeBroz02/04/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.



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