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Blue Revelations I

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by Anonymous

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by RhymeFairy08/13/05

Ohhhh ~!!

I soooo get this.
Wonderfull wording and imagery.
What a sad place to be huh.
Huggs to you my friend ~!!

Chin up ... Anything is possiable ~!!

* Smiles *

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by sweet GA peaches08/13/05

oh how i feel this ,

"would you be astonished
to feel lanced wounds
of knowing cut flowers never bloom".... could any verse be as bitter sweet as this, my my my , ... what a thought this leaves,... in awe... sweetGApeaches...

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by My Erotic Tale08/14/05

revealed

nice wording and alluring write, sprinkled with the haze of blue poetry

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by LeBroz12/04/06

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Of the two nonerotic revelation pieces,
This has a harder, darker feel
That even my Double Fudge Chocolate pudding cannot soften.

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by LeBroz12/04/06

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Of the two nonerotic revelation pieces,
This has a harder, darker feel
That even my Double Fudge Chocolate pudding cannot soften.

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by tazz31707/30/12

REVELATIONS OF THE PAST

brung into the present. TK U MLJ LV NV

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