by Brooke1
There were a few mistakes, but other than that I thought it was a very good. Keep 'em coming. ;)
An interesting concept, and one that has been well-written. Can't wait for the sequel! :]
It was very well-written and got me soooooo wet. I can't wait to read more!!
that can not be the end...where's the rest of it??? please tell me there's more...
a role reversal can truly be a very erotic experience-
thanks for your creative viewpoint.