by bayisle66
Loved it. Had me excited throughout.Can't wait
for the other chapters to come
Great story had me hard the whole time, plz write more quick...cant wait for the son to pound his mom all night long.
great piece. keep her cumming.
i enjoyed that mom was an older woman not some supermodel. very realistic descriptions.
hey... am a newcomer 2 this site but loved this story.. if you could.. a 2nd part would be ideal!!!
With so many writings to your name, why don't you re-energize this one and make it a true blockbuster. The theme is awesome and unlimited in opportunities for you, and us.....
Revisit your schedule and thoughts. this is awesome and worth many chapters of great reading.....
But it's a real shame that the mother opened up her cunt to the boy's roommates and not to her own son. After all, it's the boy's own birth canal, the same cunt he came out of. Why does he have to blow his young balls jerking off while he's listening to his mother getting her ass fucked off by some other guy? The boy's creamy semen doesn't belong in some stupid kleenex, it belongs up the cunt that gave him birth.
This was very well done. But, the story has more yet to share. I'd like to read it. So, more please.
The story was masterfully crafted. On less than one page, bayisle66 managed to tell us a very erotic story in full detail & in all its complexity. Bravo!
The author very accurately depicts what's going on in a voyeur son's head & heart when he sees his mom having sex with a man other than his father (as a voyeur son i can vouch for that!)
The author depicts very accurately the fact that an oedipal son likes - & yes, LOVES! - his mom the way she is. That includes some extra weight, some cellulite... nothing about her can bother him.
When mom looks unusually sexy &/or is flirting with men &/or a man is obviously hitting on her, a voyeur son gets totally aroused, & in thouse moments, he is on cloud number nine.
As an older guy I can speak with authority that older women are NOT "Loose, sloppy pussies". That part of female anatomy has a wonderful ability to tighten up with disuse and in most cases is no more "loose" that a non-virgin 20 year old.
I did like the story, just show some respect
FIVE-STAR STUFF!
A must read.
_________
* The title describes my humble self.
The story is short & sweet & strsight to the point. The author managed to tell us the whole story on less than one page.
Story tags are NOT misleading (mature mom, watching mom).
I am not the only one who liked the story: do far it's got 215,228 views & 56 favotites (not bad @ all).
My mom was married to my dad till he died. However she knew how to attract men's attention & how to flirt with men. My parent had a wide cirvle of friends & they entertained a lot. At their lake side cabin ghey organized big parties ghat lasted deep into the night.
I heard my mom hitting on men (it was way beyond flirting, she was propositioning them).
Based on my observations her type were divorced men who were 10 years younger then her. She would brazenly draw the guys attention to herself. Her jokes tended to be double entendre. She would tell him he must come the following weekend for lunch. He would usually show up early, before my dad. She would get him drive her to some stores. Some of them became our "family friends".
This is one of many incidents when she acted inapproptiately.
She was alone in the cabin, standing by the range. Everybody else was around fire pit. Her ex-boss entered the cabin purpoortedly to go to the restroom. He stopped behind her & started to caress her bare thighs & when he reached her shorts he squeezed her ass cheek. I was outside in the dark, she could not see me. She just removed his hand from her ass, & whispered, "someone will see us, be patient...there is a time for everything..." she blew a kiss to him & pointed to the restroom.
Hi bayisle66:
The storyline was masterfully crafted.
The sex scene between Matt & Beth is one of the best on Litetotica: ANTHOLOGY MATERIAL!
If you are into son-waches-mom scenarios, take my advice & READ THIS STORY.
I am copy pasting anon's comment:
Brilliant! A tour de force!
Thank you for this story.
unbelievable that a starting 20 guy fucks a 53 mother and son gets jealous, poor guys happy mother
I am copy pasting an old anon comment:
Anonymous almost 3 years ago
BRAVO! An outstanding story by a very talented writer. ☆☆☆☆☆ (5)! Very very erotic. Also very romantic. Poetic too. "3 in 1!" A must read.
Hi bayisle66:
The storyline was masterfully crafted.
The sex scene between Matt & Beth is one of the best on Literotica: ANTHOLOGY MATERIAL!
This story is a very very erotic without being pornographic. It also is true to life.
I really really LOVED it: 5.0 (=100%, ★★★★★)!
This mom-sex-story is one of my favorite ones in the "voyeur son" sub-genre on Literotica. I gave it a 5.0!
The story is:
(a) short but sweet, and
(b) straight to the point.
If you regularly masturbate to a sex fantasy about your mother, chances are you do have the Oedipus Complex. Most young men do not feel guilt over the fact they lust for his own mom. Lust is not a crime, after all.
I am copy pasting this story because it stood the test of time!
Quote:
Anonymous - over 18 years ago
Felt like I was there
Loved it. Had me excited throughout.
Can't wait for the other chapters to come.
End quote.