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Moose Hunting

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by Anonymous

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by RhymeFairy08/25/05

Cute ~

I like the imagery here.
I think ya might have took it
a bit further. The pic is sooo cute.
Just wanted to sit and watch.
Thanks to your great imagery
I got to visit and relax.
Just a lovely lil trip.

Thanks ~

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by don8765408/25/05

Great

Very beautiful!

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by Jennifer C08/25/05

Another good piece

Your words compliment the image
nicely, you paint a lovely picture
and I enjoyed the journey.
Thanks.
~ Jenn

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by J.Doe08/25/05

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This illustrated is better of the two you submitted today, but as stated in the other one's public comments, the photo does nothing interesting for the text.

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by LeBroz08/26/05

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Well done, though the photo would have been more satisfying with the moose being more dominant - too swallowed by its surroundings here.

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by My Erotic Tale08/27/05

excellent

wow, I enjoyed this write very much, and I can only ask, ...did you take the picture great job...more please (o_o)

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by ishtat08/27/05

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With a telephoto lens and without the last verse(it reads like an advert) this would have been even better . But I envy you the experience!

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by Anonymous08/27/05

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Again, I would have left the picture out. You write beautifully- lots of good images here, but your meter was just enough off to make this reader trip up.

Tattler

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by duddle14612/26/06

life.

An admirable attempt at explaining the joys of hunting Moose. The photo, tho' from a distance was enchanting. Moose can be Majestic and proud and at the same time be shy. Nicely done.

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by tazz31704/22/12

HUNTING AS A SPORT OR HOBBY

still requires permission and tags. TK U MLJ LV NV

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