All Comments on 'My Daughter, My Slut Ch. 01'

Sorry...

I see this is your first so don't let my comments stop you. Your layout of a story had a very short good start, but then it could not hold my intrest and I snapped back to the real world... Your next will be better....

agree, was to short and needed bit more depth to keep me into it. The idea is good like always, but more description of feelings and emotions.

This is a hot story, but could be even hotter if you have her dress up in nylons, garter belt, pleated mini skirt and silk blouse. Maybe she will get a cum facial all over her face and clothes from the football team.

Being the Daddy's Slut in my real world this story is right on, do write more! Share her with her dad's freinds and the high school principals too! Yeah baby...it really happens! I'll be watching for more! Kiss Kiss!

Ceilidh

Findlay OH

I thought the story was great! I can't wait to read more, you can really keep this story going for awhile. Keep on keeping it kinky.

I SURE HOPE THERE'S LOTS MORE OF THIS NASTINESS, SOON

No lead up, and entirely way too kinky for much of any real understanding. Things like this simply do not exist! Ya might as well be telling a story about some nigger fucking a female Martian with his limp pea sized cock.

While the idea is really hot, I feel like I came in during the middle of the movie. There's no lead in, the sex feels rushed and it's hard (no pun intended) to grab the characters.

My daughter does like to fuck around a bit but not a whole bunch of guys at once. She is "daddy's girl" however and her thing is to come into the computer room when she knows I am watching porn and usually have an erection. We are always naked in our house so she comes in and sits beside me and watches porn with me and snuggles up with me and strokes my cock and when I start havng some pre cum leaking out she takes me in her mouth and sucks me until I cum in her mouth so she can swallow it all. If her Mother happens to notice her sucking my cock she joins us. We limit our sex with our daughter to oral sex. BARE469