All Comments on 'Solo, Want to GO?'

by sandspike

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
nice write sand~

we each sprout wings from birth and soar different space and time yet one day may land perched next to another on a flight and share wisdom and.....poetry <grin>

J.DoeJ.Doeover 18 years ago
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The puncuation in poem is a bit distracting to me, but nevertheless, I enjoyed it. New imagery, fresh metaphor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
sound like

a master helmsman steering the winds of thought..vivid images that flowed ever so smooth..blue

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Sanity taken ~

I love this epic lil write of time,

and space. I can feel your urgency

to plant roots before it all unravels.

Just me, love it Sand.

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