All Comments on 'Invitation'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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A nice soft morning wake-up call.

SensualMaleSensualMaleover 18 years ago
Very nice!

Gotta love waking up to the scent of a steamy sensual night and taking it again from there ;)

logophilelogophileover 18 years ago
lovely

Direct and sincere and so very sexy. Nicely done, Moonie!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
passion

truly embodied so much passion....

it captured it with nice elegance and go movement throughout the poem.

very very hot.

***let's act it out!***

Honey123Honey123over 18 years ago
Lovely

Such sensual images you created with your words!

~Honey

BelegonBelegonover 18 years ago
Well-Captured

...that moment of awakening, ezpecially if you awaken before your lover, after a special night is both wonderfully romantic and erotic.

fairysongfairysongover 18 years ago
Just wow!

your words painted that moment of awakening, of passion and heat. I could close my eyes and feel your words. Once again, lovely work.

~Tink

CeriseNoireCeriseNoirealmost 17 years ago
Love the imagery

Suck vivid images of a sensual moment. They create such a nice mood.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

im curious...

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