All Comments on 'Loving Wife'

by Timkitten

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AzuldrgonAzuldrgonover 18 years ago
Bait and switch

Nice story. Very naughty trick she played on her hubby.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Delicious

Oh, that poor deceived husband! I should be so lucky!

Fine story, thank you.

H20waderH20waderover 18 years ago
after shave on the Balls????

i can screams from here.

any alcohol in that area burns, so much that unles you wash in cold water it becomes unbearable.

other than that error i liked it and gave you a 5.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great story!

amazing story kitty! Seems almost real! x

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Thanks

Hi, Timkitten here. Just wanted to say a very big thank you to all who have voted, and to those who have left comments. It is very rewarding for a writer to receive votes and comments, and it is very much appreciated. So thank you for spending your time reading my stories. Kindest of regards, Tim.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Nice with the switch but too short

I would have liked to hear what happened next when he knew the sister was the one available... 3-way? Getting to watch the sisters get it on?

DangerDan1DangerDan1about 15 years ago
interesting

Nice twist, good writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Dumb idea

Sure that this little episode will be a one-off? Not likely. Cheaters on the road to divorce. And they'll be lucky if he doesn't smack them for the rubber band idea. It probably was VERY painful and could have done serious damage.

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