All Comments on 'In Training Ch. 01'

It was one of the best erotic works I have read lately.

Please bring on more training and virgin sex.

OMG your such a wonderful tease, this is so erotic and sexy and i want more, You have left me wanting more.

Very well written.

please update soon, I hope her young virgin body gets teased more, will you tease her nice clit? Make her not cum until her Master says she can? Please I need more, my clit's swollen just from reading this.

Very well written, hanging on every word and action (step). More please and very soon, thank you.

great start to what I can see is a long series. Very well written and builds nice and slow. My very young gd(38) will love it.

Nobody talks like the male character.

This is a good start. I hope it doesn't degrade into the typical: the girl enjoys her situation. An abducted girl never falls for such nonsensical mind control. I hope I read of her continued struggles and torment. I want her to be forced until she is either disposed of or set free.

LOVE IT!