Because that's what you've written. Why if she's so sorry for what she's done does she continue to lie about how many men and how many times she cheated on him. Why does he get a stiffy when he watches the tape and then why does he blame himself? He was working and from the way you wrote these chapters it seems as though she doesn't do if his job demanded him to be away for five months why didn't the bit h go with him?
Again you said you wanted to have a strong husband but you wrote him like a little bitch so I only gave you two stars.
This was so misleading. You said it was not a wimp story and that is exactly what it became. Please don't cheat your readers in this way.1 star rating.
I loved the story. I would find it easy to believe it is a true story and not just something you made up. So ignore the nay sayers. Simply unless you have had to live though a cheating spouse, you can't say how one should act. So much depends on how strong the marriage is when the cheating is discoverd.
As they say "been there done that".
You DID turn it into a wimp story... The skank even lied in her apology, saying she only cheated once... "I was so lonely, and it was once, just once."
Shows how much trust hubby can place in her... Never heard the saying fool me once, shame on you, fool me twice, shame on me? Someone lying after all that doesn't deserve trust...
Not a wimp story? Give me a break. This was twisted and a bit far fetched. Thanks for the offering, but your intro was misleading.
You call this a story!!
As it the sorry excuse for a human being of the author.
Not too shabby, get rid of the first few paragraphs before wifey discovers that she's a lezbo also. The slut had it coming and I think hubby needs to punish her a little more. Put her on her knees and let her suck the new girls pussy while hubby reams her little slut rear end out.
Isn't the story a lot better when the sex is fun. Personally I'd shop around for a good strap-on and let Amanda take care of wife's cheating ass. While Amanda was nailing that slut's ass, I'd be fucking her in the mouth to teach her a lesson!
P.S. This story is much better than the first one. People don't have to be guilty or mad to enjoy recreational sex.
Lezzie's don't turn me on.
Wish it would have been labeled correctly.
Well I'm definitely turned on. Good story :-)
a woman's fantasy. With women constantly complaining how men cheat, as if women never do, this just is not a realistic fantasy. Makes women happy, but for a faithful man, this is disgusting and not sexy. The a normal husband wouldnot have accepted her action - especially because she recorded it to see later. Lonely? Gosh and he was not lonely. He cheated? Not erotic, not a man's way of looking at this situation.
For the short read.
Because he went from being an outraged husband to just another cheating husband in light speed time. How does he set all this up so fast? And just because they have a "group cheat" things are going to be okay? BARF!
She follows him, lies to him ("only once" - bull) and Bradley? Within hours after he had left her he had a woman in his room, being ethically just as rotten and retarded as her.
Lot of your stories had a mix of imagination, and erotic talent behind them, this, felt like you were rushed to make a next chapter. You steered away from the situation, he discovered her affair, perhaps others too. If your writing style is not cheating wives, then stay away from the topic. In reality there is no erotic theme when a husband or spouse discovers the tragic truth of lies and betrayal from their spouse. Retaliation would occur when presented itself. He would have sought out to ruin those men that willing entered his home, his bed and his wife. Their families and spouses would feel the same pain and loss as he felt. You want to include a prostitute in the chapter, fine, but with both woman in the scene, honestly doubtful. the video took his spirit away, in regards to his wife. Those special shared emotions and desires he experienced with his wife are truly gone, worse her cheating was on their marriage bed. I would if this is part of your story ideas, re write chapter 2 with a more fitting approach.
And she simply didn't go visit her husband while he was out of town WHY???
Here's the thing... I actually agree with you. My husband is well aware that if he ever cheated, I might do more than just leave him, I might Lorena Bobbit his ass (well... other body part). And I hold myself to the same standard in real life. But the POINT of this STORY is cheating and I don't like stories where someone gets hurt by their spouse, so ALL of my Loving Wives stories are going to end up with the husband being okay with what happened... because otherwise it's just too sad and upsetting to me. I don't want to deal with it in a way that I find more realistic, I like the fantasy better. If you don't like that, that's fine, but I'm not the only one who writes that way... not sure why you're wasting your time reading the category.
Again no rating. I never venture into this category so I won't attempt to rate it as such. However, in reference to ch.1, the wife lied saying she only cheated once and we know she didn't stop until she realized it wasn't a replacement for her husband. Still she would have went to her grave never saying anything to her clueless. faithful husband, sort of like my true life situation.
How about writing a tale where the husband is a cheating asshole and let the wife accept it. I'll read it. Let me know if you will attempt this feat.
How is the cheating slut wife having sex with another woman going to erase the pain of discovering her cheating in the first place? He's made a devastating discovery and all of a sudden he's going to be okay? And in the same day? Without a chance to process the entire mess. It seems highly improbable. That's why I rated this story a "1".
Though I am not BTB if she make a genuine mistake, however if the sort out to cheat and humiliate the husband then he should go nuclear on her !
In this case the wife should have been ordered to watch the husband with Amanda and go through the ordeal of seeing her husband taking Amanda anally with passion !
Then afterwards for round 2 she could get involved in a 3sum.
The wife got off way to lightly. The husband should have a free pass to keep seeing Amanda for a year !
She cheats while he's away....multiple times (7) by her own estimates,over a two month period. Has the STUPIDITY to videotape it...and KEEP it for 4yrs! After discovering the past indiscretion,Her husband asks for 1 night by himself to think things over...and she can't even give him that! Goldeniangel's twist on how the Hubster handles this? The husband picks up a woman ....and let's her fuck his wife. Wow! I bet that will teach Suzie a lesson! Just a crap ending. I'm a BTB type of guy,but will admit there are times when restraint is useful and necessary. THIS..was not one of them. Why not just make the ending one big sleepover pillow fight. Lame. -BGunns
Took the enjoyment away,it's a RAAC she can't be trusted,not even close as written.
Makes me nauseous too think of it.
It's rather man hating to completely emasculate someone and then have him decide she is worth taking back.
Only once, huh? So she is a cheater and a liar. He's a moron. 'Nuff said.
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