All Comments on '24 Hours Ch. 01'

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!

need to find out what happens next!

Delicious.....

-cerise

Don't ever stop please~~ this lifestyle is so much apart of me, and i love being able to read about it, share about others experiences, true or not!!

This is really good! And I don't just mean the sexual content, which is arousing, but the writing is perfect. The elements are perfect. You have the dominance, the submission, and, most importantly, they love each other. He's so gentle with her when he bathes her and feeds her. I absolutely love it. You have talent.

I am intent on making mine a woman I have know for some time. I found this story favorited on her tablet, and I can see why. Well done. Hopefully you won't mind if I borrow a few ideas.