All Comments on 'Poetic Justice'

by Salvor-Hardon

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Cherokee RoseCherokee Roseover 18 years ago
Powerful!

You paint a vivid picture! Lyrical and well-constructed. Sexy poem from a sexy guy.

sophia janesophia janeover 18 years ago
~

Remind me not to disobey you. :)

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Wowza !!!

A naughty write, of a special tail.

From one, we all know so well.

It drips with cravings,

of gushing delights.

Spanks the muse

for all tonight !!!

Wicked and sweet !!

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

A powerful vision of

Dom

sub

and

trust.

Well done.

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
LICK MY LIPS,

this was such a delicious treat.. y*u*m*m*y... reads like candy....... -sgp-

logophilelogophileover 18 years ago
Nicely done

A nice piece, Salvor.

The words, the cadence, the images all beg to be read aloud and shared with a loved one.

Congrats on a job well done.

SaucyminxSaucyminxover 18 years ago
wonderful as usual

*shiver*

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Master

You honour me...again...I am yours

kiten69kiten69almost 18 years ago
Shiver...

great connection between D/s, very nicely written gave me goose bumps...

SluttyPillaroftheCommunitySluttyPillaroftheCommunityabout 9 years ago
Well done, young man

A lovely piece. I know so many men who would love to be in her stilettos. ;-)

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