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Poetic Justice

bySalvor-Hardon©
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by Anonymous

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by Cherokee Rose09/01/05

Powerful!

You paint a vivid picture! Lyrical and well-constructed. Sexy poem from a sexy guy.

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by sophia jane09/01/05

~

Remind me not to disobey you. :)

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by RhymeFairy09/01/05

Wowza !!!

A naughty write, of a special tail.
From one, we all know so well.

It drips with cravings,
of gushing delights.

Spanks the muse
for all tonight !!!

Wicked and sweet !!

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by LeBroz09/01/05

~~

A powerful vision of
Dom
sub
and
trust.
Well done.

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by sweet GA peaches09/01/05

LICK MY LIPS,

this was such a delicious treat.. y*u*m*m*y... reads like candy....... -sgp-

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by logophile09/04/05

Nicely done

A nice piece, Salvor.
The words, the cadence, the images all beg to be read aloud and shared with a loved one.
Congrats on a job well done.

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by Saucyminx09/07/05

wonderful as usual

*shiver*

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by Anonymous12/06/05

Master

You honour me...again...I am yours

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by kiten6906/22/06

Shiver...

great connection between D/s, very nicely written gave me goose bumps...

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