by RedHairedandFriendly
with the heart of every poet...who writes for the mass and yet ..to the one...bluerains
I like the way this feels. Just smooth
and sweet. I can also see the feelings
in the air, wishing ... hoping.
Just a wonderful ride of hope and play ~
More Please ~
DC:
I can write a fair story and tell a decent tale but it turns out that I'm not much good at poetry so bless you for being so talented that your able to ably work in several disciplines. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Verse so inspired
can be so inspiring;
creating in poets
words sprung from
the soul's heart...
This is just simply awesome, lol. I think all your poems are- and I rarely see other such poets that are at this level- greatness. *grins* I know I've felt like this dozens of times myself reading a good poem like you speak of, wishing those words were for me, just pretending they were for a while and letting them carry me away. You wrote it beautifully. Reminds me of my own style, lol
Sorry kiddo, but I've heard better and less cheesy crap from high school kids. I don't know if it's bad because the style is forced, or your mastery of the language seems lacking, or just because you're unimaginative and so full of cliches. Either way, my personal advice would be to sit back and appreciate beauty, since you don't really seem to be able to create it.
we have four 'Amazing poem' and one ..cliche critic (again?) I hope you know, Red...I for one enjoy your style of poetry. We all like different poems, I like and read yours because I relate to them. Perhaps, 'they' did not.
bows (~_~) humble....ART
Living vicariously through the poems written by another poet. Transported to other worlds ~ of fantasy and longing.