Your poem was mentioned in the Sunday reviews
and them first two lines are extremely powerful. that next stanza i love the swagger. a lot said with impact. nicely done.....don
a moment left untrue to your blue. you could move empires with your thought, and leave moutains bleeding with words. I am in awe... home sweet home. -sGp-
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