All Comments on 'Our Shared Bathroom Ch. 01'

I loved it and am waiting for the second chapter. I hope to read It soon. It was very Erotic, and sensual. A good start to what could be a good many chapters in this story. Keep it cuming. Thank you!

God-damned hot! More!

One of the better stories I've read in awhile, can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it comes soon.

KEEP GOING

Well written. Please continue this story line.

carry on

Please hurry up with next chapter.....

Very HOT!! Write the next chapter!

Good god, this is by far the best story I've read in a long time. I've Never read a story on here more than once but I read yours 3 times. It's so hot, please write more chapters, I beg you!!

That was the best incest story I have read in months..I loved the part where her panties ripped..only thing wrong was that there was not a second part...please continue

Don't go too fast. this has great potential!

It was great. I've already read it three times, as well. Most of the stuff nowadays seems average but your story stood out big time. Very easy to picture. Need more! :)

All we want now is - - - more!

Lukas

LOVED the ripped panties part. More please, more!

great storie love every bit good bit of writing keep the stories coming you are very good i must say. the storie was so very erotic and so full of sex. jim from england

... and simply beautiful!

loved how you didn't turn it into a sex romp, but actually gave us some back-story. i'll definitely be reading more of your work.

Great story! Had my dick stiff. What about next morning???

Nobodys sister is that considerate. She knew what she was doing...surely. Let your brother stick his naked dick between your legs to make him feel better? Yeah right...Pretty damn hot though...Nice start...

The Best Ever!

I am jealous! I have 5 younger sisters and not one ever took care of me like that! I could come right now! GREAT STORY!

That was an awesome story and I really enjoyed it!! Great job!!

Hmm, how shall i say?

Sometime ago i was idly going thru literotica in my PDA, while on travel and found your story. I very much liked, but somehow forgot the title.Now after some 6-8 months , i'm seeing this, it is really nice...means:

I've trying for this one post every time i've been in this section...

you r really HOT...

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Nocturnalknight

This is just pure win. I would love to see as many like this as possible. It's not just the fact that it's an erotic short story that gets me going, however it's your vivid descriptions as well. The mild story that grows inbetween the brother and sister is deep, but not too deep... This story just hits my spot. Thanks so much.

1 of the best I've red in a while

this is one of the best stories and series i have ever read in my life

i was there the whole time man. really great stuff, it totally drew me in. super hot, and i would kill to be that guy.

Not Only Was This The Most Vivid, But With Every Chapter That Has Accompanied The First, It Has Exploded Into A Perfect Erotice Master-Piece. Would Love To See You Submit More Work. From My Reading, I Saw No Errors, Very Descriptive, Just Captivating. I Encourage Anyone With An Interest In The Taboo/Incest Genre To Read This Story, And Learn From What Has Been The Best Story I Have Seen. I Am On Here Every Single Day, And This Casts A Shadow On All Work! Very Good! Encore!

THIS WAS GREAT MAN THIS WAS THE ONE THAT REALLY HOOKED!! ME IN.

P.S. HOPE YOU MAKE A PART TWO!!

I loved your story, very arousing and well written. Reminds me of a game me and my cousin played so many years ago. Thanks for writing such great material.

A real masterpiece!

a lil slowesque but damn much better than a lot of the less developed writing on here, great plot ...

excelent surreality.

youre stories make my day..the tension, teasing, innocence....I cant wait for more!!

believability. teasing building tension. sexual playfulness.

5-STARS pls write more!

Words cannot describe how amazing this story is.

iv'e been reading this stuff for more than 3 hours bravo..

amazing...either i have no life or this story is frikin' interesting as fck!!!!!

5 stars 5 thumps up!!!lol

i dont care if it's brother and sister it makes the story even more interesting....man fantasies are killers

so friggin hot. Kind of inocent and really sexy at the same time. Now that I am really turned on...whats next?

Wow. Simply, WOW! What a hot story. Please, more!

fantastic story cant wait to finish it

I couldn't stop reading!

Great job, really!

I'm going to read the rest of your stories. :)

It really was nice, in a very understated way. As one of your previous reviewers noted, it wasn't simply non-stop sex, but a wonderfully sensual coupling - hopefully only the first of many, many more.

This is sort of how it started with sister. We would "wrestle" with myself always ending up between her legs then we'd rock back and forth until we both came always in silence and under the pretense of "wrestling". This continued for several months till one time when we did it in our underwear. Of course her panties ripped and my hard dick came into contact with her extremely wet pussy. Well we continued rocking with my cock sliding between her lips. Soon our moans filled the room and all pretense of "wrestling" were gone. She lifted up as I rocked back and in it went. We never imagined it'd feel so good as we really began fucking in earnest.

loved it innocent, sexy, hot and it has a story line throw them together and u got an awesome story.. i plan on reading them all :)

loved it,,seems so natural for that to have happened,,leaves the reader wondering what will happen next

Erotic and yet innocent and yet not that innocent which proves once again that up front images do not always do everything...you have to leave a little saliva for the next time.

Will definitely read some of your other stories.

You should have refrained from the "puberty" comments. Not necessary in "adult" erotica.

I also like brother/sister and shared bathrooms as my last submission shows. Can't wait to read more. Nice work! :)

Cant wait for the next chapter!!!!

Is there anything else that happens after that? This story gave me an erection you have some good story's so what happens after she left

bravo,too short,looking fwd to another chapter

Great story! Wonderful, slow build-up, well written and always more enjoyable than SUDDENLY sis/bro/mom wham-bamming like lovers for years. True story, I too, shared a connected bathroom with my older (by 4-years) sister. So, growing up I was allowed to walk in whenever I wanted. My mother even told her to shower with me for convenience, which we did alot. But we all grow up - and one day, when I was 12, I walked into the bathroom while sis was showering and told her mom wanted me to shower with her - to save time and water (which was kinda true). We all hadn't realized how much I grew over the Summer for I now towered over both my sister and my mother but they still looked at me as their 'little boy'. I was near 6' at 12, (and am now 6'5"). But I remember I got a hard-on while we were washing each other, but I didn't get embarrassed. My (gorgeous blonde) sister couldn't stop smiling and even jacked me off - that first time! Shushing me, she forever after made sure she showered with me! My sister started pulling me into her bed a few weeks after that shower and we have never stopped our love-making, even since being married to other people. My mother asked my sister one day a few months after my sister and I had commenced our incestuous trysts, why we never fought anymore, why, even, had we started to hang around each other? (All the time!) When my sister looked at mom with a blank face, my mother suddenly looking equally surprised said, "You're having sex with him, aren't you?" My sister confessed all! She took responsibility, but she told our mom we weren't going to stop! NO WAY! Everything from our responsibilities around the house and our school grades had improved remarkably and we both no longer seemed to suffer from teen angst that was so prevalent among our peers. We had both become calm teens! Sis told me to start kissing and hugging mom more without telling me why, (which was never a problem - our mom's a fox! AND - we all read Literotica all the time!) They had both decided to keep us a secret from dad, and from me knowing mom knew about us - lest I give it away to dad - like we both gave our behavior away to mom. I remember our 38-year old mom started wearing much less clothes around just sis and I, becoming a braless, open-shirt cowboy, and just being much more liberal around us when dad wasn't home. I realized when mom knew one night over a year or so down the road (our naked) mom opened sis' door to tell us to keep it down, b/cuz dad was sleeping! One weekend morning, a couple of years later in my senior HS year, dad was gone to town already and I was cooking at the stove in my gym shorts with my mom not 5-feet away at the table drinking coffee, when my (pregnant at the time) sister came up behind me and yanked down my b-ball shorts to around my ankles, and then said, "Mom..., Ed's cooking naked at the stove again!" I left them where they lay. Our Mom got up from her seat and smiling, (I THOUGHT she would lift my shorts) but instead smacked my bare-ass, and then proceeded to start rubbing them! I started to rise, so I quickly doled out the eggs and turkey bacon, and proceeded to eat breakfast in the nude in front of my laughing sister and mother! But you can see why this story is relegated to comments instead of being a Lit story itself!

This story is as good or better than the bulk of the toplist yet unbelievably isn't on it. My *only* guess is that the lack of penetrative sex somehow turned otherwise 5 scores into something else.

This is quality work. The relationship is believable but bite sized ( I wouldn't have minded more backstory but only because I ended up liking the people involved not because there was too little. The sex is very close to reality and experiences many of us lucky ones have had. It teases of more possibilities and yet satisfies enough that you aren't in a fit. Flow is exceptional and language reads beautifully like a young man recounting his tale of a treasured memory. ( No overblown dark and stormy night stuff)

Top shelf all around. I'm glad to have stumbled on it through the randomizer but saddened that others may not be as lucky. This place confounds me at times, it really does.

I voted 5 as its the only number thats deserved. Also, fav'd and fav'd authored.

It was THAT good.

I hope you keep writing as well and other people come around to you talents. You brighten up the place.

I do believe quite a few people have had the experience, I grew up in a one bathroom house that 7 of us had to use, not a whole lot of privacy.

nice.. keep it up..!

I'm so happy!! I thought I'd die if there wasn't a chapter two! Wooooo!!

M@

Wow, I just about spontaneously ejaculated when Jen's panties ripped apart. I am very much excited about the next chapters. Thanks.

Wow chapter 1 was GREAT...don't know if I can handle chapter 2 without a short break...And now I see Caph 3-4-5-5.5 guess I should get a beer and get comfortable, I'm going to be here for a while..

Thank you..great writing.

A really good story. Sweet and innocent and oh so wrong but oh so right. I just love everything about this story.

if I was her and after he told me about his bad day. I would tell him get under covers naked close your eyes after he did that I would have got naked myself kiss him on lips softly as I rub his dick and then say to him i want you to feel better so do what you want to me and when you blow your load just leave it in then after we get done making love I will 69 you all night long and put it in me over and over

when she leaned even more forward, spread her legs and said "Go ahead, you can go under them."

It wasn't to help him get to sleep.

Cool

I wish this was longer.

(Last poster) ...it is, many more chapters!

...wow, I haven't seen this one in a while! Looking forward to reading it again, yay! :). ...hell, if I was the brother I don't know if I could have resisted slipping inside my sister! (But looks like he's a quick shooter, hehe;)

I'd be nailing that hot pussy two, or three times a day if I could!

Weeded

Nice story, nice sister too, lots more to CUM me thinks, ready n waiting 5* from me 👍🏼

Large families in small houses often have to share everything and privacy is extremely rare but it does lead to closer relations.

Sis and I shared a room. She noticed that I woke up with a throbbing erection every morning and would see me jack off to relieve myself. She asked me why I jacked and I told her that it always made my erection feel better and to make it go flaccid. Her curiosity got the better of her so she asked me to show her how to do it. Soon, she was doing my jacking for me every morning!

Thank you for this- it read like a novel. I don’t often read literotica that plays like a movie, so yeah, this was pretty sick.

I remember reading this many moons ago, and just stumbled upon it again today. Good Stuff.

I think dresses and skirts fit her very well for how feminine she is :3 Ilove their relationship, it is so sweet and loving!

Okay...great beginning to this story...looking forward to more of this...

I am glad they gradually moved into the intimacy here; brother and sister sharing...this is one of the most sensuous beginnings I can remember reading in a while...and I think it will continue this way!!

Please write and publish the next chapter

That was a good beginning, but it could have been a little bit longer. The only problem that I had was the wording for the following sentence:

"She was wearing a thigh-length loose purple skirt and matching black top."

In what universe does a BLACK blouse match a PURPLE skirt? I think that a better description might go something like, "She was wearing an ensemble that consisted of a thigh-length loose purple skirt with a black top."

I gave you a 4/5

What the heck? A purple skirt and a black blouse? My god, the horror, literally unreadable.

Looking at google images, both look fine though? I don't see much of a difference. Black and purple match well either way around

Black and purple clash son! Get your life right! Lol.

For real tho, good story man.