All Comments on 'Breakfast With My Baby'

As usual, your choice of words is brilliant, Jennifer. You have me looking out for your poetry, and getting excited with every new one when I find one.

I , too, look forward to being able to read your latest poem. You certainly have a flair for words.

Now that is my kind of breakfast Jennifer! Mmmmm

Very erotic poetry here,

Ravish me in jam delights

circulating seedy treats

in appetising areas of

intimate starvation.

I see great improvement in your writing and this is one very sexy highly erotic piece. Great imagery and a yummy flow!

Keep this babies cumming hun ~

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you do evoke such delight,

delicious,

and other carnal things,

shadow,

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I meant blushing <grin>...excellent tail, I mean poem. I ENJOYED this read ...(~_~)

...is waiting for you on my dining room table. Yummy poem!

I enjoyed the read.

Hey, it's my gushing buddy,

with a verse so hot;

serving up hot breakfast,

the kind best served supine.

<yum><slurp>

oh that is so good...

if that's your idea of a meal,

I'll never be late again!

Wonderful word choice here JC. You achieve a wonderful weaving of sensual pleasure combined with the basic need to be feed! I love how simplicity reigns here on many levels but seduction creates a complexity that holds the reader craving for more.

Nice write girl

du lac~

There is nothing like 'intimate starvation', though your poem comes very close.

all the trimmings and lust is fried, TK U MLJ LV NV