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Elevator Music

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by Anonymous09/11/05

Yes Fantasy of an erotic mind

Didn't care for the beginning as the story was short enough to beef the beginning up a bit. However did like the ending and hope to hear more from this author.

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by elfin_odalisque09/12/05

Just the overture?

Very hot, very erotic and beautifully crafted, as always, Patricia. Perhaps I'm biased as it has long been a fantasy of mine!

Great stuff.

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by Namizujs09/12/05

Well written as ever

Dear Patricia,
It was as good as all of them.
(If I'm less than raging, is because im not so much in for plain exhib. lesbian.)
Please write on, so we can read on.

John

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by dgowre04/24/13

What a lovely imagination! Bravo! You write so well.

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