All Comments on 'I Want To Be Your Man'

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4degrees4degreesover 18 years ago
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wonderful.

i wish i could write like that.

Jennifer CJennifer Cover 18 years ago
Excellent piece

Loved this write SR,

very sensual and erotic.

You make writing look

so easy and effortless.

Really enjoyed this piece.

Nice work hun,

~ JC

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Love it!

With a mind like this

you can be anything you want;

Enjoy!

Aunty MuseAunty Museover 18 years ago
You ?

Rather nice, as expected, but I am confused be two "you"s. The first wants an "r" I think, and the second an "'re" or at least a comma does it not?

"for you attentions."

"You my always untouchable "

duckiesmutduckiesmutover 18 years ago
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Your poem was mentioned in today's reviews.

sophia janesophia janeover 18 years ago
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Well done. I can relate well to the sentiment.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
I want to be your fan

could you change the words, a little and sing it to me, maybe it's me, the un's seem to undulate and make it unforgetable

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
YOU MAKE ME...

want to be in 20 degree weather, to chill this HEAT ... *winks*.... this is by far a most splendid performance of writing and thoughts, and prevoking thoughts.. and touching thoughts, O' my, I do believe it is hot in here.. I loved it ... every line, and it is un.for.get.a.ble. sweetest peaches to ya'.. sGp

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
versa

This is a good topic, men claim they would love to be women and would be sluts <grin> and then women want to be men...well that's your poem <grin> I enjoyed your write.

BlackShanglanBlackShanglanover 18 years ago
Strong, intense work

Powerful, lean, rich, and evocative. Very fine work.

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
favorite spot here......

I crave the opiate of your breath

that has brought strong men trembling

for you attentions. I want to feed

and feast upon your addictions.

*****

nice piece seattle......don

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