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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz09/13/05

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Another dark piece
from you today;
hope it's just writing
and not for real...

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by My Erotic Tale09/13/05

passion

passion flowed as strong as emotions in this write, tie two birds together and though they have four wings they can not fly...(~_~)

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by Ronnie Wachuka09/18/05

My God! When you hurt, you hurt bad.

DC:
Since you don't care for brandy, if I could, I'd sit you down and offer you a fine glass of wine and some of my blackberry pie to see if it would bring a smile to your lips. Ronnie W.

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