by Softly
A good read if you enjoy 'knight in shining armour' stories.
On the outside, aren't most of us ordinary? Thank you for a wonderful, heartwarming story.
Softly, your stories keep getting better and better. I really appreciate the way you can pack so much meaning into so few words while creating a scenario that pulls your readers into the story, letting them join in the scenes in their minds.
Thanks!
I really liked the lead characters but GEEZ, give them some time to fall in love. Love at first sight is one thing, but this was too fast. You could have really had a great story worthy of several chapters.
his father saw something in Ellen and just went with it. 5 stars kind of short and to the point
Ron
The "average" girl is going to take a stranger's dick and gift wrap it on the first night she meets him? And he's the bosses son? That's too far fetched even for fiction. Pretty silly.
Great scenario, great plot, great story line, great language, great characters. Really lacking in character development of half of the characters, like the twins, but does a great job with the others. For a one pager, both very exciting, erotic and complete.
hanging start to a love story but missed the mark when the end of the story left me hanging as a reader. 4 stars
Suddenly the young rich boy totally falls in love with the girl because she tied a ribbon around his penis while he was passed out drunk? They didn't even know each other, and they were both instantly ready to conceive a child to make the relationship permanent. I know this is a sex fantasy site, but come on! This is beyond ridiculous.