All Comments on 'Another Deer Path'

and I thought the form was in a nice step blending the verse without break...thats a great style for me...ty/bluerains

...is always complex. I like this one, a lot, but can't really articulate why. I could say "well, it's mysterious" and it is, but that doesn't satisfy me.

I could be simplistic and say that anything that mentions the Rosetta Stone would win my heart (and mind). But I also dislike the simplistic.

Let me just say this sounds well to my ear and moves me in ways I don't quite understand.

Sometimes it is good to not fully understand.

found your words to be mysterious in meaning,

but loved the way you used them, and the

context itself.. left me wanting to come

back for more.... -sGp-

stomp away,

I see you are leading people down mysterious paths again,

But you Know I will follow

Bleeding in Greek ranks right up there with brain saliva.

A nature piece with more truth than is nature seen.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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Long torturous path to the bedroom. Beautiful metaphor.

...meaning your poem, of course...