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Heaven Can Wait

byRecidiva©
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by Anonymous

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Can't believe this was an editor's choice,

not well-written, not interesting, a waste of time.

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by rgraham66609/20/05

Interesting

Not sure what to make of it, but it sure was different.

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by Anonymous09/20/05

Not at all!

'Eyes sliding over you with the impersonal flow of water over rocks' come on, man! You've had that happen to you, haven't you? That is brilliant visuality!

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by Anonymous09/20/05

I don't understand it

Why did the editors give this a green "E"?

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by Quiet_Cool09/20/05

Excellent!

Absolutely excellent. Ignore the negative feedback. It's well-thought, well-written.

Thanx for writing this,

Q_C

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by Anonymous09/20/05

A writer?

Please, please, don't give up your day job. This was terrible.

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by Matadore09/20/05

Blow up the TV

Were I a piggy little troll, I might knock down your numbers, but this is so exquisite and funny...

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by Anonymous09/21/05

piqued my interest

An interesting premise (if I understood you correctly). This scene stands alone very well. Excellent use of imagery.

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by sack09/22/05

original, but....

Well, you get an A+ for originality....Laurel and Manu salivate over this kind of thing. In every other respect the story is unsatisfactory, barely comprehensible and full of contradictions. (why would heaven have "horns" and a "tail"??) And why would anyone care if such a repulsive character gets to heaven or not anyway? There really is no sex here, so this belongs in the non- erotic category. Your other new story, Stalk, is much better and has been rated accordingly. I think 3.25 for this one is just about right...the masses have spoken!

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by impressive10/01/05

Impressive!

Very well done and definitely deserving of the "E." ~Imp

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by Anonymous04/22/06

Fascinating

I love this little gem. Beautifully written. Excellent work.

Harry Leg

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by damppanties08/22/07

Heaven can definitely wait!

This is brilliant. It has so many dimensions and different readers will get different things out of it. Just... brilliant.

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by Anonymous01/15/09

outstanding!

loved it!

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