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by BrettJ

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RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 18 years ago
Cute..

I've toyed with words some do say,

but this one here, sure made my day.

The poem you wrote was nice and sweet,

and made me want a tasty treat.

So with this final phrase from me,

I hope you know that all will see,

a different side of our Brett J...

and that's the best part of this today.

Thank you for your friendly verse,

and no... I didn't need a hearse.

I enjoyed this poem of yours

it made me laugh and spew these words.

I enjoyed your poem Brett *grin*

Red

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Great

It is obvious that a lot of work went into this one, to make it rhyme and have any kind of meaning.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
hehehehe

kinky is wild

kinky is grand

fucking madly

driven by command

so take me dear Uncle

and drive me wild

cause this little fucktoy

is your sister's child

love landi

laffytaffy69laffytaffy69over 16 years ago
Ehhh

Not so good. It looks like you tried really hard, but it was still a sorry attempt at real poetry.

AphroditeRebornAphroditeRebornalmost 16 years ago
Excellent

I liked this one a lot and so much I had to comment :) I just finished reading almost all of your incest stories and I love the way you write! *kisses* Uncle Brett

landieklandiekabout 15 years ago
Poem

ohhh Uncle Brett I love it.. can we try it out sometime soon too? -kisses-

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 14 years ago
Very cute.

It made me giggle and laugh.

PrettyPinkPearlPrettyPinkPearlalmost 13 years ago
LOL

Clever.....or maybe I just love the Doc......I'm not into any of it, but I really loved your poem.... ;)

KinkyLOVEKinkyLOVEalmost 10 years ago
Well DUDE, or what ever, that maid my evening as I kneel on the floor of an Everyone Convenience Store at nearly half past midnight in NAGASAKI, JAPAN, with workers glancing my way from time to time, butt too polite to say even word one about my WILD appe

Woe-ah, I'll have deeply to think. 'cuz KinkyLOVE does more than make your finger stink.

That lacks in meter U might complain, and there U have me it is plain, which makes my pain a bit inane since it's SEX we seek and not your BRAIN that's BUGGERED out of eyeless sockets though which hot jism shot like rockets. NOW THAT, IMHO, is a BE gin-ing and Numb Bull Pin's YON'S his one two which we might for see-cunt inning stick the BAT INTO Said CUNT and then if YON'S next BATTER tired to BUNT, make its wings FLUTTER and YELL OUT: "PUNT THAT BARGE POLE IN YOUR HOLE. IT'S CALLED AN ARSE AND NOT A CUNT." ISN'T THAT AS KINKY AS YOU SAID? NO, NOT REALLY. WE'VE READ, "NOT DEAD," butt puns are as low as humor gets, so my hat's off, U win all bets, and yet when that dead batter bit the dust and said, "It tastes like dirt." I'd have to raise my skirt and flirt. 'Cuz if you like your SEX W-A-Y KINKY, NECROPHELIA'S GOT MY WINKY. HE MIGHT BE DEAD, BUT WHAT THE HELL? A BONY COCK'S QUITE NASTY BUTT SWELL. If you're SICK, then KinkyLOVE will make U WELL. Yet if you're NOT, U may as well be SHOT.

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