I've toyed with words some do say,
but this one here, sure made my day.
The poem you wrote was nice and sweet,
and made me want a tasty treat.
So with this final phrase from me,
I hope you know that all will see,
a different side of our Brett J...
and that's the best part of this today.
Thank you for your friendly verse,
and no... I didn't need a hearse.
I enjoyed this poem of yours
it made me laugh and spew these words.
I enjoyed your poem Brett *grin*
It is obvious that a lot of work went into this one, to make it rhyme and have any kind of meaning.
kinky is wild
kinky is grand
driven by command
so take me dear Uncle
and drive me wild
cause this little fucktoy
is your sister's child
Not so good. It looks like you tried really hard, but it was still a sorry attempt at real poetry.
I liked this one a lot and so much I had to comment :) I just finished reading almost all of your incest stories and I love the way you write! *kisses* Uncle Brett
ohhh Uncle Brett I love it.. can we try it out sometime soon too? -kisses-
It made me giggle and laugh.
Clever.....or maybe I just love the Doc......I'm not into any of it, but I really loved your poem.... ;)
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