"As time torrents disappear"
So gentle by nature....
farewell to summer. Nicely done. I admit, I looked up "penetralia", I always like finding a word new to me.
Well done, blue.
a swell poem blue, I love what you do with words with your mind painting.(~_*)
blue, you have a real talent for alliteration. The poem is fine, this is a suggestion, check out either Norse or Welsh poetry, if you haven't done so already.
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