All Comments on 'University Flashback'

by pinkybare

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
AGAIN ANOTHER REFRESHING STORY

The threesome was between the husband, wife and another woman. AWESOME. Best of all, it wasn't a story about a wimpy,cuckold husband. thanks

jw2801jw2801over 18 years ago
Poor poor Joey!

That was just so hot! Fantastic story gave me the greatest of visions - and resulted in poor Lil Joey to take a hell of a pounding!

Scooter1970Scooter1970over 18 years ago
Wish I was Luke

Well Done, Pinkybare.

A fab story - well done.

I really enjoyed the shock arrival of Jude and your reaction. Very convincing!

Can't wait for more additions to your 'library'.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Short but nice

A nice little tale. Thank You. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Abrupt ending

Overall, the storyline was good. However, the description of her own hair was a bit naff and the misuse of the word to, instead of too made it falter, technically. The most disappointing bit was that the storyline climaxed one paragraph from the end and then petered out immediately. You need to carry the storyline through more.

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