All Comments on 'That's My Girl'

by Water_Melanie

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
spooky

You used just the right touch for this story. The simplicity of style and lack of drama make the eeriness of what's happening stand out better in contrast. This is really well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wow!

The story line itself chilled me to the bone, excellent writing and great hook!

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