All Comments on 'The Portal to the Vixen Planet'

and what a treat it was!

kisses,

T

I love it.

I had the pleasure of reading this

a few weeks ago, and still, I like ~!!

Humor, satire and trickery in words.

A great write Art ~ !!

More Plaese~

Nice bit of local color writing with a good ending. This was a pleasant read.

ARTTTTTTTTTT

My sides hurt and tears are running....

Love it hun and I hope you do really well....

Always, Lizzy

Lucious, RF, anon and E~

This story was first written as a poem/tale that grew into a ten chapter story currently being reviewed for publication <bigrin> (which is why I haven't submitted them all to 'Lit') I was contemplating on entering one more chapter for my second submission...any thing catch your eye?

(2) passing peanuts (3) the black hole (4) night of the Comet (5) Fishing for Vixens (6) crop circles (7)the eclipse (8)the Jedi Knight (9) Invasion of the Vixens (10) "Good Night Moon" >>> my favorite is chapter ten (he sort of actually goes to the vixen planet <bigrin>

thanks and I hope you enjoy my erotic TALE~

You are the rising comet in writing in all venues. Thank you for the best one yet. Looking for more to come.

It was sheer bootiful

Satin and Lace

That war right good readin, ET, a real knee-slapper, by crackey.

and I think.

you are very creative,

I have not read all chapters

but this one made me laugh and smile,

was quite witty !

-sGp-

Talk about neuron misfires!

And I still like that image of the volunteer fire crew, looking for pussy up in a tree (while the cat meows his plaintful tale).

Will be looking for the book.

And I thought I was a headcase! "Yer slicker than greased owl shit Art!" Good luck!

Cookie :D

Maybe just a wee bit over-the-top on the down-home rural dialect for my taste, but very interesting, and imaginative.

Rumple

Definitely original. Pretty funny. Certainly weird. And I puzzled and puzzed til my puzzler was sore...

"Shucks" and "Heck fire" your a riot Arto

alby watching for more

...from the scary stories.....loved it!

thoroughly enjoyed your story. Bud Waswiser, my favorite character.

Keep on rockin on!

The hokey dialogue reminds me of Petticoat Junction. Perhaps this story needs a suitably "down home" theme song?

Hmmmm....I'll have to dish one up. Good luck!

from ear to ear with this one.

Very funny.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

Is this really the way people talk on the Trinity River? Never mind, dialogue is tough and dialectic is even harder. It's worth a "5."

Very funny tale, Art...

Happy Halloween...

~Honey

LOL this was great entertainment. Thanks for the laugh and good luck with the contest :)

Well done Art, i was looking forward to you particular take on halloween.

Well worth taking the time to read. Had my husband wondering what I was reading because I was laughing.

This is a hoot hun!

Brilliantly written

as always, sooooo

funny! I needed a

laugh and this really

did the trick.

Great work babe

~ JC xxx

Just on the basis of the title alone. Got to be the best title in the contest, and the story wasn't half bad either!

Great job, MET

Are the rest of the nine chapters posted somewhere?