by geronimo_appleby
an excellent erotic fairy tale
a very good twist off the old childrens tale
a very clever and erotic read....thanks Art~
how you managed to find a new twist to such an old tale. Especially one that has been done so many times. Very nice.
Good luck.
Black Tulip
A very hot story and well written. It could have been edited a little better but that did not detract from it.
It could easily have been trite, but it wasn't at all. Nicely done.
...with what the others have said. Good writing and a fresh twist on an old storyline. Congratulations.
Rumple
I didn't expect to enjoy wolf sex so much! Very hot, but i feel the end of the tale let it down a bit, personally, I don't think you needed to explain the name. Otherwise a great tale!
I really enjoyed this one... a good twist on an old tale. Very hot! Good luck!
Cookie :)
Great story. I'd love to hear more about Sabrina and Faolan. Don't wolves mate for life? if so, she would be his mate, right?
Wow. Hot wolf sex. I didn't know I had it in me to be so taken... :-P Very nice, good luck to you.
Oooooh! Geronimo, this is a deliciously naughty piece of writing... I love it! :)
Nicely done! A great read. Very hot...
I do share EL's thoughts RE the ending.
A really good story - nice concept, hot sex... I agree that you didn't need to reveal what the name meant at the end; it was obvious at that point.
A pleasure to read...and I liked the reveal of the name of the end.