All Comments on 'Red Riding Hood'

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kinky shy girlkinky shy girlover 18 years ago
A new twist to the old tale

Very clever and imaginative. Kudos.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Interesting

and well written.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
erotic fairy tale

an excellent erotic fairy tale

a very good twist off the old childrens tale

a very clever and erotic read....thanks Art~

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 18 years ago
Amazing

how you managed to find a new twist to such an old tale. Especially one that has been done so many times. Very nice.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 18 years ago
Very hot

A very hot story and well written. It could have been edited a little better but that did not detract from it.

minsueminsueover 18 years ago
Well written

It could easily have been trite, but it wasn't at all. Nicely done.

sacksackover 18 years ago
fascinating

well written and informative, yet sensual at the same time. Bravo!!

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinover 18 years ago
I agree...

...with what the others have said. Good writing and a fresh twist on an old storyline. Congratulations.

Rumple

English LadyEnglish Ladyover 18 years ago
Surprisingly hot!

I didn't expect to enjoy wolf sex so much! Very hot, but i feel the end of the tale let it down a bit, personally, I don't think you needed to explain the name. Otherwise a great tale!

cookiejarcookiejarover 18 years ago
Geronimo...

I really enjoyed this one... a good twist on an old tale. Very hot! Good luck!

Cookie :)

KatLadyKatLadyover 18 years ago
Any chance of continuing the story?

Great story. I'd love to hear more about Sabrina and Faolan. Don't wolves mate for life? if so, she would be his mate, right?

suitepsuitepover 18 years ago
red

Wow. Hot wolf sex. I didn't know I had it in me to be so taken... :-P Very nice, good luck to you.

kjtattskjtattsover 18 years ago
Delicious!

Oooooh! Geronimo, this is a deliciously naughty piece of writing... I love it! :)

Unsung MuseUnsung Museover 18 years ago
Grrrrr... !

Nicely done! A great read. Very hot...

I do share EL's thoughts RE the ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hot story

A really good story - nice concept, hot sex... I agree that you didn't need to reveal what the name meant at the end; it was obvious at that point.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great!

A pleasure to read...and I liked the reveal of the name of the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Neat

Haven't read such a good one in a very long time.

LeeclarkLeeclarkover 12 years ago

Not bad, I wish you would continue this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Aaaooooooo!

A howling good time. Where do I drive next Halloween?

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