All Comments on 'The Test Ch. 01'

Another interesting start DG. You just have a way with stories. Always a few surprises.

An Avid fan.

even want to think about what you are going to put him thru. maybe i should say what she is going to put him thru. good story so far, have no doubt it will continue to be. a fan always.

I can tell that this story has some good possibilities. Keep it coming. Thanks.

What a great premise! So many possibilities, so little time! I can't wait for the next installment....

Great start, waiting for the next installment.Don't wait too long. Hate the long waits between stories. I really wonder where this story is going. I read some of your other stories. Some good stuff.

My bet is chapter 2 will have the younger sister move in and flirt for 30 days. He should ask for for a chasity belt for her but that will not happen. The question for me is which sister he might end up with since his present choice will be testing him the length of the marriage.

Interesting beginning. Can[t wait to see where this is heading - could go in a few directions. I'll be looking for the next part. Thanks for a good read.

I have a feeling that you have a very rough 30 days in store for this character. You are off to a very creative start

What a great beginning for your story!

Boyd

. . . before I even noticed who the author was. Great story and even a better punchline coming I think. Then I saw the author's name . . .It figures. Really good start. JimDinMN

I like stories that are not just what my husbadn calls jerk off stories. The plpot here I think will involve the woman's sister and a month w/o sex might make the man horny and maybe think about cheating! We'll see

And I have the idea that he WILL be tested, just like in the joke.

Does he REALLY love her enough to turn away from sex with the sister. Well, we'll soon find out[I hope].

Like the others I'm tagging along 'cause I'm curious where the story is going. Like most commenters I have my idea but your the boss so get on with it. It's a good start. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Let's see where it all leads to...

you kept spelling "staring" as "starring" which bugged the hell out of me. Other than that, great!

Well shucks, I was ready for chapter 2 as soon as I finished chapter uno.

The party seems like a place to spy from the fence, but the month w/o sex seems an unlikely place for her to go.

I'm waiting for chapter 2, now.

Sj

I really enjoyed this story! keep up the good work!

And it is illegal LOL

Cause it just ain't fair heh

They can see a setup coming miles away. And I'm thinking she's about to "test" him. If she does he should cancel the wedding and move on. She'll NEVER trust him. Regardless of the outcome of her tests. And who would want to live with a manipulative woman anyway? Without trust the marriage is over before it begins.

So why should he trust her? She did a background check on him? Who does that? It is apparent that she will set him up in a "fidelity test", and if she does, he should walk away, and never look back. By testing his fidelity, she will show that SHE cannot be trusted, and cannot be honest! It shows that her love for him is conditional, and that she doesn't believe him when he declares his love for her, that it is something to be tested, something to be proven. It says that she believes him to be inherently dishonest. When you test someone's love, it only proves you don't love them back, it basically says; "I don't trust you at all, and I don't care if you say you love me, because you are a liar in my opinion, and everything you say must be proven beyond doubt before I'll believe it!"

I really hope that if she is so callous as to test him, ( only proving her own dishonesty), by using her sister to tempt him, that it backfires and he leaves her for her sister! It would serve her right for her deceit.

The old joke was funny but this is a serious tale. What does she have in store for him? We shall see...

She was WAY too touchy about a joke. That should have been a red flag. For a policeman he didn't seem very observant. He should have been suspicious about her falling for him so quickly after her divorce. He was her rebound. When she told him that she knew he had slept with some of her friends and her older sister THAT should have set off all kinds of alarm bells in his head, yet he continued to follow his "little head". Then she pours gas on the flames when she tells him she'll take him for everything he has if he cheats on her. So the next chapter better contain a pre-nup or this guy will just appear to be too dumb and it will ruin the story. It's already pretty bad that he isn't listening to a word she's saying. What a fool. We'll see how this next chapter goes. Please don't let him act like a complete moron and marry her without taking precautions and listening to the words she's spouting.

That was very funny. What a dolt!

This is NOT a love story. It is a trust or rather a distrust story. Neither partner loves the other; at best, they are fuck buddies. They both have doubts about the other partner and they both have been burnt. The chances of this future marriage of being successful are slim and none. And you know what happened to slim, right? He moved away, so there is only one chance: none. Both already plan something for the ladies night. We'll see what chapter 2 offers?

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BJ