All Comments on 'The Maid's Tale Ch. 01'

With a little bit of eloquence in the style this writer could be very good . Even so a hot little story is in the making.

I get the feeling we could be seeing incest in the future!

Not sure of the "incest" that may happen. But with his wife out of town so to speak for the season, there seems to be a lot of time to get the maid impregnated and well on the way to creating a family between the Master and Maid, at which time the wife may want to go on to other things, or simply come home and be a nanny to the maid's baby.

I love that he left her wanting more; fantastic writing.

great start to what clearly has a possibility of long life ahead of it. i just hope it doesn't go the incest route and turn the good memories i have into sour ones. But keep up the good writing!

Interesting premise.

Would have liked it better if she at least pretended some reluctance/resistance that had to be overcome.

Four stars.