All Comments on 'The Maid's Tale Ch. 02'

Lovely erotic writing. But a tad more tension would be nice.

Perhaps she is going to have the stableboy's baby?

Loved it!

Luke

Premise still OK.

Sex still rushed. At the very least, after he ate her to an orgasm, her 'learning' about his cock could/should have been much more detailed. What was/were her reaction/s to handling a cock for the first time? What were her reactions to how he reacted? Certainly there could have been some dialog with her asking him if he liked what she was doing. And when she experimented with trying new things. Faster. Slower. Harder. Softer. Ans what about his balls?

Four stars.