by RedHairedandFriendly
Expectations of the author's name,
so well satisfied here
with visions of passion's fire
and post-orgasmic bliss...
Grr~
I love your rhyme and imagery. *Smiles*
You held us close
and gave freedom
to ... release~
Yummy poem of erotic
delights,
that take flight ~
Meowwww~
If you are going to rhyme, stick to your scheme.
"within" and "them" do not rhyme.
more work than its rhyme scheme--which is okay. Sometimes, near rhymes work out just fine. You may want to give free verse a try and watch out for too many cliches. :)
Keep writing and loving what you do.
DC:
I'm proud of you! Thank You. Ronnie W.