All Comments on 'Cyanotic'

both of your poems are fairly good, but so much of the same.

The images are a bit opaque, but the overriding sense of breathlessness carries this one beautifully! Good work, anna.

Fly

I can not get enough of more of the same,

What the hell I'm a fan. anna you do have a tendency to lose and audience, sometimes it comes to me a day later, it is always worth it for me, and to tide me over, interesting words.

you got a thing for the mail man?

possibly not what you intended, but a possible interpretation anyway.

I promise not to make you hold your breath if you will lead me out of here. While I do find it very interesting here, I really don't want to live here.